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Asylum
Contributed by
Sommer
on
Friday, 24th May 2013 @ 01:03:56 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Talking to myself again
I wonder what will happen when the meds wear off and I'm free again
Tell me doctor what happens then?
Can u handle all the rage
You locked me up inside this cage
And it's your nightmare now believe me
And I cant wait to watch you bleeding
These pills put me to sleep
Too bad for u cuz I ain't tired
A million souls you keep
I feel my time in here's expired
I don't need your chains and locks
In this straight jacket I'm admired
By my fellow inmates, liars
I ain't crazy just inspired
Remember when you checked me in?
I cut your name into my skin
And used the blood to paint the walls you thought you could confine me in?
There are some new skills I've aquired
friends taught me to play with fire
I see through the tranquilizers
Ill make you burn in hell you liar
These pills put me to sleep
Too bad for u cuz I ain't tired
A million souls you keep
I feel my time in here's expired
I don't need your chains and locks
In this straight jacket I'm admired
By my fellow inmates, liars
I ain't crazy just inspired
You say your here to help me
That's not true your here to wreck me
Shut me up and hide me back inside this hole
Well guess what I'm done pretending I'm ok with happy endings
And I'll make you watch as I rip out your soul
These pills put me to sleep
Too bad for u cuz I ain't tired
A million souls you keep
I feel my time in here's expired
I don't need your chains and locks
In this straight jacket I'm admired
By my fellow inmates, liars
I ain't crazy just inspired
As I burn you in your sleep
Your orderlies
will find my pills all in a heap
Beneath the mattress where I'm horrified to sleep
Bet you didn't see this coming
I relish every scream
that leaves your mouth it makes me
Smile to know im finally busting out
Busting out......
Copyright ©
Sommer
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2013-05-24 13:03:56]
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Re: Asylum
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by Archie on
Friday, 24th May 2013 @ 01:13:09 PM AEST
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| This is interesting. In my opinion you were right in your introduction this is a little out there. It is a good but scarey write. |
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Re: Asylum
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by Helenesovig on
Friday, 24th May 2013 @ 04:32:15 PM AEST
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A little out there and special, but I personally liked it.
And a great title by the way! |
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Re: Asylum
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by Sommer on
Friday, 24th May 2013 @ 06:39:55 PM AEST
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| Thank you for the feedback :) I thought it would be fun to write from the point of view of the criminally insane. |
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Re: Asylum
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by emystar on
Sunday, 26th May 2013 @ 07:08:12 PM AEST
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will find my pills all in a heap.
This part cracked me up.
Great writing, keep it up.
Blessings,
emy |
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