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the fire in me
Contributed by
thehotshotpoet
on
Friday, 24th May 2013 @ 11:57:33 AM in AEST
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5/24/2013
a simple sign of dignity
the part I like to share
it is the better part of me
so read it if you dare
the little things I stand for
are right before your eye's
so if you read them carefully
then you might Realize
it's in the words I write
the way it must be done
my simple words of wisdom
Revolve around my son
he's every move I make
some might disagree
he's everything inspiring
the happiness in me
so without further conclusion
if you know me then you know it
he is the fire inside
of the hot shot poet
Roy Randolph Andrews AKA(thehotshotpoet
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thehotshotpoet
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2013-05-24 11:57:33]
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Re: the fire in me
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by Sasha on
Sunday, 26th May 2013 @ 10:39:28 AM AEST
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| very well expressed.. |
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Re: the fire in me
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by emystar on
Sunday, 26th May 2013 @ 07:28:24 PM AEST
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Good write, friend.
The way you are dedicated to your son makes you a rare and very good man.
Huggs, blessings,
emy |
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Re: the fire in me
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by CharM on
Wednesday, 29th May 2013 @ 08:22:05 PM AEST
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| Very captivating I love the flow of how your words came together. Always great to have someone inspire you right by your side... |
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Re: the fire in me
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by Survivor on
Sunday, 14th July 2013 @ 07:00:00 PM AEST
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| An very interesting rhyimg flow. using great rhymes in each second stanza and forth stanza. I enjoyed reading this also for the powerful emotion you put in it. great poems are best when written from the heart. |
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