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Shade of the Forest
Contributed by
deusdeira
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Friday, 24th May 2013 @ 06:40:44 AM in AEST
Topic:
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I am lost, deep within a dark forest. No sound escapes these ancient limbs as they reach out for me. Echoes ricochet and blend into the silence, and only the crunch of leaves beneath my feet, keeps me alert. I know that somewhere in this darkness there is a light. Walking through this silent prison consumes my passion... laying waste to my ambition. I try to climb into the light, but as i reach the top, a branch breaks, and i plummet to the forest floor. My fall is broken by the leaves, but my spirit is broken once again. I know that there is light, for green things do not grow without light, yet every time i fall, it gets harder to get back up again. I know that it is possible to find the light, for I have found it before, and I know that it will always be there, but at times... i just want to continue my walk, and never search again. Darkness consumes... and i would be consumed. Yet i cannot give in completely, and i cannot fight completely. Forever cursed to walk in the dusk. Leaves crunching beneath my feet... ever treading through misery and despair. A tree does not contemplate why it grows. Do the trees whose branches i break with my fall weep. No. They continue to grow, and hope to one day branch into the light.
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Re: Shade of the Forest
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by Archie on
Friday, 24th May 2013 @ 08:20:35 AM AEST
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| I like this. You have a favorable style even for musing. |
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Re: Shade of the Forest
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by stevenfloyd on
Friday, 24th May 2013 @ 10:03:26 AM AEST
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| I liked this write, It has in some ways the same meanings as one i wrote. please read who am I by Steven Floyd |
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Re: Shade of the Forest
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by Sommer on
Friday, 24th May 2013 @ 12:51:05 PM AEST
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| I can definitely relate to the feelings conveyed here, good read. |
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Re: Shade of the Forest
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by Shallow on
Sunday, 26th May 2013 @ 03:16:26 PM AEST
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Your reference to the light and your passion to reach it is immense...really like how the end draws in..magnificent musing in my humble opinion
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Re: Shade of the Forest
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by emystar on
Sunday, 26th May 2013 @ 07:58:30 PM AEST
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As you well know it happens. You did a real good job with this.
Blessings,
emy
I think some times we have these feelings so we can relate better with others. |
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Re: Shade of the Forest
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by Voyager on
Friday, 10th January 2014 @ 10:51:41 PM AEST
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Its an interesting narrative style you have wrought.
"They continue to grow, and hope to one day branch into the light."
A very noble and hopeful ending allegorically told. |
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Re: Shade of the Forest
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by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 27th April 2014 @ 09:29:14 AM AEST
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this is so beautiful, it comes around and all fits
perfectly together, simply beautiful and so
peaceful,
hugs n' love nessa |
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