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Butterfly Dreams
Contributed by
shelby
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Tuesday, 21st May 2013 @ 06:18:17 PM in AEST
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The wind is howling,
rain pouring down
lots of city noise
puddles all around.
Not seeming like spring
no sun today
the butterflies have flown
gone away.
I keep them in my dreams.
They emerge within me
reminding me of rebirth
souls release, beauty in soul
beauty in woman, fly.......
It can rain today,
and pour into the night
but when I close my eyes
there they will be
the butterflies, surrounding,protecting
reminding, there is true beauty
pure love, magic on the wings.
Copyright ©
shelby
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2013-05-21 18:18:17]
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Re: Butterfly Dreams
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 21st May 2013 @ 08:30:57 PM AEST
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| Nice poem. Advise-make transitions from verse to verse smoother |
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Re: Butterfly Dreams
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 22nd May 2013 @ 11:58:36 PM AEST
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Beautiful write, girl friend.
Huggs, luv, many blessings,
emy |
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Re: Butterfly Dreams
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by NoSaint on
Thursday, 23rd May 2013 @ 12:43:01 AM AEST
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| lovely my friend |
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Re: Butterfly Dreams
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by Sasha on
Tuesday, 28th May 2013 @ 11:14:47 PM AEST
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| Another beautiful poem from you! Lovely! |
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Re: Butterfly Dreams
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by myheartsvoice on
Sunday, 16th June 2013 @ 11:19:16 AM AEST
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Simply beautiful shell then i would exspect no less from you . . .
sorry for thr houdini act again lol i just deleted
the facebook account, just going through the
Ben changes that only i can understand, of
myself and need to go through even in my
almost perfect world, i'm on here again from time to time :) |
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Re: Butterfly Dreams
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by flavellm on
Tuesday, 18th June 2013 @ 04:32:44 PM AEST
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| Well crafted piece much enjoyed! |
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Re: Butterfly Dreams
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by Voyager on
Thursday, 2nd January 2014 @ 04:04:05 AM AEST
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'I keep them in my dreams.
They emerge within me
reminding me of rebirth
souls release, beauty in soul"
Nice lines, thought provoking because like a phoenix (but ina different way) butterfiles signify transformation a rebirth but in a different form, from a crawl to a flight thats beautiful. Well captured! |
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