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Shivering Love
Contributed by
shallow
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Tuesday, 21st May 2013 @ 05:20:43 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Flowers on a cross remain
crimson sand to breathe
Withered whispers make the inscision
ashes seeking salvation beneath
Buried answers to the deaf
Enslaved lullaby to the crimes
Paralyzed ambition to the sickness
Hollow prayers to the malign
Mother;can i make beauty stay. . . ?
Snow-music on the window pane
Empty doors to break in
Screaming silence breaks the symphony
Ensconced decadance delivers shame
Careless realism costs souls
Jaded idealism mocks my sacrifice
Vilifying verses severs the cord
Rested nightmares baptise the ghouls
Mother;can i make beauty stay if I. . . ?
Rustic needles on innocent veins
Stranded visions battle forgiveness
Kindled seizures stir the dust
Pantheistic plague veils my lust
Rejection gifted to the gifted
Blind lead the blind
I wait to escape purgatory
Kind forsake their kind
Oh mother; can i make beauty stay if I take my life away ?
Be still my son; you are home
oh when did you become so cold ?
You have such oceans within
Try to save them more,bleed no more
The blade will keep on descending
Search for beauty find your shore
All you need is to feel my love
cascading
(Its a little raw i guess.Please comment and let me know your thoughts.I Would be Grateful .)
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shallow
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2013-05-21 17:20:43]
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Re: Shivering Love
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by karu on
Tuesday, 21st May 2013 @ 11:07:09 PM AEST
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no other,
like mother
superrrrrrr creation GOD bless you |
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Re: Shivering Love
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by deusdeira on
Thursday, 30th September 2021 @ 01:08:35 AM AEST
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| A beautiful poem. Thank you for your kind words on my own. I re-read my poems sometimes when im feeling down, and your comment on shade of the forest always cheers me up. This is such a lovely piece. So much feeling and depth. No one should ever feel their mother has given up on them. I hope you have found peace in your life, and realize that every person has value, even if their family cannot see it. |
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