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Slipping Away
Contributed by
ScribereHabeo
on
Sunday, 19th May 2013 @ 10:53:14 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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I remember when we first met
That feeling was hard to forget
Your tears held back by anxiety
hoping you would fit into society
You were just a little girl
Taking life just for a whirl
But my memory is a little hazy
I feel like its driving me crazy
Now when I see you, your fine
I am still okay knowing your not mine
As long as your okay
I don't have to remember anyway
I can't feel my self......Slipping away...
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Re: Slipping Away
(User Rating: 1 )
by mimichilds on
Monday, 20th May 2013 @ 05:45:51 AM AEST
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| I really like this |
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Re: Slipping Away
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by Archie on
Monday, 20th May 2013 @ 04:52:48 PM AEST
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| This is very good. I keep expecting more lines, but that's just me. Great write! |
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Re: Slipping Away
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by CharM on
Monday, 20th May 2013 @ 08:06:30 PM AEST
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Great poem...
You spelled a few words wrong though - "it's" driving me crazy; Now I see you, "you're" fine; As long as "you're" okay |
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Re: Slipping Away
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by Sommer on
Friday, 24th May 2013 @ 06:32:55 PM AEST
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| Wish it was longer!! So good. |
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