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I Miss You
Contributed by
Archie
on
Friday, 17th May 2013 @ 04:07:30 PM in AEST
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So here we are
in this place again
together but wavering
in the stormy seas of life
And for a time
I thought I would jump in that lake
where I would drown deep in your love
but that time is forsaken
And when you left
theres a part of me
that everyday still dies
(Chorus 1)
I miss you
So here we are
you are with another love
but you say you want this time
just to be with me
That time is gone
never more to return
in the fire love now burns
that can never be quite quenched
And in my soul
I know its wrong
how can I let you return
though I miss you
(Chorus 2)
(I miss the days I sang to you
at midnight under the moon
holding on all night long
cause we had a love so strong
Walking down the piers of life
knowing nothing could make love light
thinking this love would go on for for ever)
But now you're gone
and I must admit
though we must be apart
I miss you
Note; This song is still unfinished, but I thought it could be posted after 6 years of work.
Copyright ©
Archie
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2013-05-17 16:07:30]
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Re: I Miss You
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by PhantomVampyress on
Friday, 17th May 2013 @ 07:14:32 PM AEST
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| this is tragically beauitiful.. I love the emotion in it and its so well done!! awesome job!! |
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Re: I Miss You
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by emystar on
Saturday, 18th May 2013 @ 12:40:48 AM AEST
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Great writing friend. I know it's hard but life goes on.
At least you seem to have come to grips that it's time to let it go.
Awesome song. I'd luv to hear you sing it.
Big huggs, blessings, sssssmiles,
emy |
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Re: I Miss You
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by shelby on
Saturday, 18th May 2013 @ 01:34:32 PM AEST
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Beautiful
Michelle |
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Re: I Miss You
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by ladyfawn on
Friday, 23rd May 2014 @ 02:23:42 PM AEST
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absolutely b e a u t i f u l!!!! i love every line! one of
your very best for sure my friend, it is exquisite,
hugs n' love nessa |
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