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Seeking Light
Contributed by
Sasha
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Friday, 17th May 2013 @ 06:38:41 AM in AEST
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A moment’s eternity in your realm
Sloughing illusions from my life
The music of prana thru the liquid sun
Strum brilliant notes, my existence
I wait this lifetime
To be back in your arms
Your footfalls ring so close, familiar
Leave me searching, longing
Where are you, who are you
Did you linger as love I was blind to
My heartbeats pace on the eagle’s flight
The vantage you drive mesmerizes me
Show me who you are, would you know me
Wake up to me, come alive
You have me captive to your absence
Oh supreme one, I seek you…
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Sasha
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2013-05-17 06:38:41]
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Re: Seeking Light
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by heartstrings_rewound on
Friday, 17th May 2013 @ 08:21:45 AM AEST
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Very nice! The final stanza is Psalm-like - both captivating and enigmatic.
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Re: Seeking Light
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by MickyTwo1984 on
Friday, 17th May 2013 @ 10:18:23 PM AEST
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| Enjoyed this tyfs. |
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Re: Seeking Light
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by Archie on
Sunday, 19th May 2013 @ 09:39:51 PM AEST
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| I can relate to your words. And God will find us when we seek with all our heart. |
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Re: Seeking Light
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by NoSaint on
Thursday, 23rd May 2013 @ 12:45:37 AM AEST
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| very moving write |
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