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You lost me now deal with it
Contributed by
Jyssvw
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Thursday, 16th May 2013 @ 06:53:24 PM in AEST
Topic:
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It's not my problem anymore
I don't care how you feel
I couldn't care less if you fell in a hole
I relinquish all control
I give you nothing anymore
You are nothing to me
A memory
Barely
Humans grow apart
Give me back my heart
I hate you
I loved you at the start
Now you turned that to waste
In your haste
You lost your best part
Me
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Jyssvw
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2013-05-16 18:53:24]
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Re: You lost me now deal with it
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by heartstrings_rewound on
Friday, 17th May 2013 @ 08:24:29 AM AEST
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Overly simple, but nice and honest! It does capture the emotions you felt very well.
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Re: You lost me now deal with it
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by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Friday, 17th May 2013 @ 06:39:40 PM AEST
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Raw anger and hurt.
I could feel this from start to finish.I can almost imagine you snapping a pen as you finished the last few lines.
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Re: You lost me now deal with it
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by PhantomVampyress on
Friday, 17th May 2013 @ 07:16:06 PM AEST
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this is a good vent for sure.. enjoyed reading.. I think we all can relate to this at points in life
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Re: You lost me now deal with it
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by Sommer on
Friday, 24th May 2013 @ 06:34:58 PM AEST
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| I am in love with this it is simple but so honest and I love your style |
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