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danger
Contributed by
workinprogress
on
Monday, 13th May 2013 @ 06:04:23 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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he slithers into your veins
like a beseeching snake
he poisons your thoughts,
beliefs,
and
alters your perceptions
he flips it
spins it
and
sends you running
in circles
he is manipulative
and even you
sound like him
his tone
and
his polluted misconceptions
Copyright ©
workinprogress
... [
2013-05-13 18:04:23]
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Re: danger
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by LilDrifter on
Monday, 13th May 2013 @ 06:45:57 PM AEST
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| The structure of this poem catches the eye and creates an image. It is beautifully written. Great work. |
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Re: danger
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 14th May 2013 @ 02:02:03 AM AEST
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Awesome writing.
Blessings,
emy |
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Re: danger
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by shelby on
Tuesday, 14th May 2013 @ 05:05:19 PM AEST
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deep and I agree the way its written is fitting for the poem.
This can have many different meanings as to who the he is.Nice job
Michelle |
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