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Fun House
Contributed by
raspberry89
on
Monday, 13th May 2013 @ 10:45:32 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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This house doesn't need ghosts to scare anyone
The walls here take sanity for fun
They'll hex you with whispers in tongue
Arrive with confidence, you'll leave with none
The longer you stay, the further undone
The air stifles, it thickens and numbs
Weighing down on you like its a ton
Constricting every cell in you, one by one
Skeletons in these closets tote guns
Heat coming at you like fire from dragons
I mean heat like the fire from a thousand suns
Your mind weakens and maddens
This house kills souls like it's a soul assassin
A suffering only the wicked could fathom
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2013-05-13 10:45:32] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Fun House
(User Rating: 1 ) by Archie on
Monday, 13th May 2013 @ 02:54:11 PM AEST (User
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Fun house or "hell" in either case i like the sentiment of this poem. You tell a compelling story here. |
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