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She's Fine
Contributed by
Jyssvw22
on
Monday, 13th May 2013 @ 07:01:33 AM in AEST
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She knows too much
The one person I can not trust
She knows my secrets
She can rebuff my touch
Without so much
As a conciliatory hug
I'm sorry
For making this tough
I'm sorry
I just don't care enough
Take care
Stay busy
Why doesn't she just do me a favor and shut the hell up
She treats me like a child
Tells me I'm wrong often
Points out when I've misspoken
Corrects my grammar
Bangs with a hammer
On my head until it splits open
She won't be happy until I am controlled
Until I am broken
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Re: She's Fine
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by davemus on
Monday, 13th May 2013 @ 08:36:27 AM AEST
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dealing with a control freak whether it be from inside or out can be difficult at the best of times. Is this an inner voice or an outward "friend"? good poem. I really liked it.
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Re: She's Fine
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by Archie on
Monday, 13th May 2013 @ 02:57:18 PM AEST
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| I get it, its a flood of emotion from disappointment and grief. (I hope things get better for you) |
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Re: She's Fine
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by Sommer on
Friday, 24th May 2013 @ 07:01:14 PM AEST
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| I definitely know this feeling. Very well expressed |
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