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He Hides His Face
Contributed by
tammyrobbins
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Sunday, 12th May 2013 @ 08:06:10 PM in AEST
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To hide his face
Camouflage violence and disgrace
Lies merged with truth
The ability to destroy
Debase
Those who are closet to him
Unable to bear self
The soul
What lies within
A fierce struggle will ensue
Regardless
Comes the end
Jagged mountains of mental instability
The unwinding begins
Sharp cliffs of deceit
He hides his face
To hide his face
Disguise with a smile
Fall from grace
Invented character
Takes lifes center stage
Hidden deep
For a short time sleeping
Uncontrollable rage
He hides his face
To hide his face
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Re: He Hides His Face
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by Archie on
Monday, 13th May 2013 @ 01:19:43 PM AEST
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| I like this poem, it reflects a part of my personal struggle with emotions and how to act on them. on line 5 stanza 1 I think you meant to write "closest" other than that this is a very well written piece. |
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Re: He Hides His Face
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by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Friday, 17th May 2013 @ 06:32:33 PM AEST
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I can feel the frustration in this piece.
I hope that you don't hide your face though, you should be proud of what you have achieved here.
Steve |
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