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This isn't enough anymore
Contributed by
MissTeenSuicide
on
Sunday, 12th May 2013 @ 07:11:11 AM in AEST
Topic:
anguished
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If only I had a heart
To feel something new
If only for a minute
If I'm lucky, maybe two
If only apathy left me
Even if it left me all alone
At least I would feel loneliness
I wouldn't feel numb to my bones
I wish that I was better
I wish that I had a use
If I only had a heart, my dear
I wouldn't stand for this abuse
The lapses in my lethargy
Reveal nothing but disdain
I think, maybe not to feel at all
Would be better than that pain
My heart seems so pathetic
My mind cant but condemn
I'd travel through space and time, my love
To be anyone else or just end.
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2013-05-12 07:11:11]
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Re: This isn't enough anymore
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by jyssvw22 on
Sunday, 12th May 2013 @ 08:59:22 AM AEST
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Riveting. Well expressed and written. I would argue that your points in favor of an end , rather than a new you are weak and require no effort. Becoming a better person, a happy person, a new you requires effort and hard work through pain, although no one can argue its rewards. Make the best of each moment as best as each moment allows you to make it.
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Re: This isn't enough anymore
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by davemus on
Monday, 13th May 2013 @ 02:10:47 AM AEST
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| I certainly feel your cynicism. Gives one a feeling there's a lot more to the story. It's dark but it's a good read. |
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