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Contributed by mick on Friday, 10th May 2013 @ 04:06:28 PM in AEST
Topic: selfstruggles

It was going so well between us. I know it was my fault it has changed now, believe me when I say 'I'm sorry' for I am no longer the same person.

I never have been the same person for 12 years, all this time it's been a struggle. Now it's going to get sorted, I want to know why I can never have the same mind in a single day.

The first loss was her, then my job and now you all before most. I see my peer's success, what do I have to show? The blood? The scars? No tears.

I try to talk to you but there is nothing but silence from you. I try to explain but still I await a response.

You said you had fallen for me, I said the same, but now I guess it wasn't but the thought of us that appealed to you. Just a phase. No more. Dead.

You will find someone else, but for me the shadow is here for me. I will have nothing but him watching me, always with me, never speaking. Always.

I thought I knew you once. But now it's no use, don’t try, I will sit here and die. No rose. No kiss. Nothing could make up for this. You were my world. My life. Now I just think of you, when I pick up the knife.

Copyright Â© mick ... [ 2013-05-10 16:06:28]
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Re: So . . . (User Rating: 1 )
by unknown_utopia on Friday, 10th May 2013 @ 09:53:08 PM AEST
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'I am no longer the same person"
Deep thoughts Deep InnerVision
well done.....

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