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Hold Tight
Contributed by
dvtpdw
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Thursday, 9th May 2013 @ 02:00:35 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Words help the heart to realize
What pictures help the soul visualize
Each life story carries on forever
Immortalizes its earthly endeavor
Death takes a body from our presence
But has no power to remove their essence
The moment a face is cherished, remembered
Every spark of love they gave is recovered
Loss feels like there is no surviving this
Road ahead is paved with dismal distress
Each day, the nightmare won't go away
Can't see tomorrow; barely tolerate today
Love never ceases; hearts carry its brand
They walk beside us, hand in hand
May be out of sight, never from our smile
We may be parted, just for a little while
The sun awaits you as you get through this
You'll find yourself smiling again, I promise
Each day, as you set out on your life's course
Stronger you'll grow with their Love's force
Copyright ©
dvtpdw
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2013-05-09 14:00:35]
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Re: Hold Tight
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by thezenmonkey on
Thursday, 9th May 2013 @ 04:16:21 PM AEST
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| Beautiful I enjoyed this poem and can especially relate to "Can't see tomorrow; barely tolerate today". |
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Re: Hold Tight
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by LilDrifter on
Friday, 10th May 2013 @ 08:54:39 AM AEST
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You had me from the start and your words carried me through to the end.
This piece came straight from the soul, beautiful !
Thanks for sharing :) |
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Re: Hold Tight
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by unknown_utopia on
Friday, 10th May 2013 @ 10:01:14 PM AEST
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ah sweetly done
thanx for sharing. |
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Re: Hold Tight
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by davemus on
Thursday, 16th May 2013 @ 12:25:54 PM AEST
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I LOVE this. Through the darkness there's always hope. So in tune with what I believe and beautifully crafted.
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