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The Frost
Contributed by
tammyrobbins
on
Tuesday, 7th May 2013 @ 09:26:30 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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The first frost came
When I was very young
Naive in my pledge
It set in my soul
Cold winds
Sharp as razors
Through my heart did blow
Second came the next frost
Which almost took my life
For deep in love I was
Unaware his affection was a lie
The frost came readily
Tears of ice I did cry
The last warm piece of heart
My beloved
Before he could take my hand
Called to Gods house far too soon
The cold deepened
This was the third and last
My heart is a unique sculpture of ice
So follows is my life
I have little time for love
Or its heavy cost
So in my future
There will be no more frost
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tammyrobbins
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2013-05-07 21:26:30]
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Re: The Frost
(User Rating: 1 )
by davemus on
Wednesday, 8th May 2013 @ 02:56:37 AM AEST
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| Wow. Very emotional. I could feel it. The imagery of the death of love to the chill of winter is very powerful. Liked it. A lot. |
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Re: The Frost
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by stevenfloyd on
Wednesday, 22nd May 2013 @ 03:01:10 PM AEST
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| broken hearts seem to never heal, and i like the way you expressed this. good write |
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