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Control
Contributed by
Helenesovig
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Thursday, 2nd May 2013 @ 02:39:13 PM in AEST
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I want to have control,
Please don’t ever let me go,
I want to be my own,
With you I am never alone,
You don’t have to talk,
With you I will always walk,
You don’t have to breathe,
I am stock between your teeth,
Your kiss is what brings me to sleep,
Your breath is what keeps me this weak,
I´m broken inside out,
I can not scream,
I can not shout.
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Helenesovig
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2013-05-02 14:39:13]
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Re: Control
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by emystar on
Thursday, 2nd May 2013 @ 09:32:36 PM AEST
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Wow,
This is a fantastic write. keep um comming.
Luv, huggs, prayer,
emy |
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Re: Control
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by anonymous1212 on
Thursday, 9th May 2013 @ 08:00:48 PM AEST
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| I really like the way this poem reads. Its abrupt and dramatic. Well done! |
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