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Used

Contributed by wetnwild on Thursday, 15th May 2003 @ 05:35:00 AM in AEST
Topic: oops

You let her controll you
Like you were a ***** toy
You should make your own decisions
Your not a little ***** boy.
You were so blind
She played you so hard
Now your left with sadness
And you have been scard.
I know how you feel
Cause it happenend to me
But you just gotta let her go
And let things be.
Cause if you don't
You will become even more depresed and sad
And goin' in like that
Would be really ***** bad!
You need to seperate your feelings for her
It's obvious she doesnt care
Cause if she really did
Then she would allwyas be there.
But where was she when you wanted it to just be you and her
Oh ya, with that other guy
She got her cake and ate it too
Are you still to blind to see that all this was a lie?!
Hopefully you see clear now
And your no longer blind to her
But in order to get over it
You gotta be ***** sure!
Being blind ***** your ***** up
It can make you see things that ar'nt there
It chases away the people
Who really do ***** care!

Copyright © wetnwild ... [ 2003-05-15 05:35:00]
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Re: Used (User Rating: 1 )
by WordPoet on Saturday, 17th May 2003 @ 02:13:18 AM AEST
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Reading your poetry I am reminded of the type of lyrics Eminem would use. Flows well in that way too. I hope the comparison is not an insult, it's not meant to be. It's just you send a clear message and say it like it is.

Good job.

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