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Cut
Contributed by
jayybabyy2
on
Thursday, 2nd May 2013 @ 12:00:58 AM in AEST
Topic:
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Inner pain.
Physical pain.
Mask my pain.
Hide it.
Buried deep.
Hard to see.
It kills me.
But I hide it.
I need to breathe.
So hard to breathe.
Need to bleed.
Dont fight it.
See the red.
Feel release.
I feel free.
Restart it.
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jayybabyy2
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2013-05-02 00:00:58]
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Re: Cut
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by Helenesovig on
Thursday, 2nd May 2013 @ 04:42:30 AM AEST
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omg, i loved the flow in this. I have written tons of poems on the subject and i know the felling and the inner pain that comes with it. This was so simple and almost angry to me and jet it really spoke to me.
I hope you get something from writing and some how make it through. |
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Re: Cut
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by TheTimmy56666 on
Friday, 15th January 2016 @ 06:22:27 PM AEST
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| Very nice flow. |
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