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Your tongue
Contributed by
Helenesovig
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Wednesday, 1st May 2013 @ 07:42:57 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Your tongue.
Your tongue is a snake,
That knows when to bite,
My word is a toad,
trying to fight,
I know what to say,
But your word beats mine,
I know what I feel,
But I should be fine,
When you have talked the truth is sat,
You are smart you are wicked,
I can´t argue with that,
I get it I'm wrong,
If you say it it´s true,
I`m just not that strong,
I`m just not like you.
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Helenesovig
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2013-05-01 07:42:57]
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Re: Your tongue
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 1st May 2013 @ 09:20:49 PM AEST
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Welcome to YPDC.
This is sad but very good writing.
You shouldn't let any one talk down to you.
I've just met you but I can tell you have talent and are a good person.
No one has the right to judge you like that.
Be who you are .
huggs, Blessings,
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Re: Your tongue
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by stevenfloyd on
Monday, 27th May 2013 @ 06:18:47 PM AEST
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I take it this was written about the one you said fooled you. very good though, nice write
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