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She's a cold habit
Contributed by
Devilish1
on
Monday, 29th April 2013 @ 12:12:37 PM in AEST
Topic:
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as she sleeps
her comfort
leaves me breathless
this monster
beside me
inside me
her scent
still serenades
the air
an untamed
paradise of my
favorite poison
a moisturizing malice
so unclean it
seems holy.
she's a cold habit
as she sleeps
her wicked side
settles
fists float
fallacy is forgotten
and
for just a few minutes
i remember why I love her
~n~
how many different ways
i could kill her
as she sleeps
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Re: She's a cold habit
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by TheTimmy56666 on
Monday, 29th April 2013 @ 02:22:46 PM AEST
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| Very nice and deep. |
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Re: She's a cold habit
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by richard2 on
Monday, 29th April 2013 @ 04:32:53 PM AEST
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excellent write: You express the idea that
desire is always subject to the inner demons
very well
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Re: She's a cold habit
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by northernlights on
Tuesday, 30th April 2013 @ 08:10:25 AM AEST
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| The darkness witnessed on the revelation of some aspects of human nature can be the most scary just on realisation. We unwittingly tread fine lines and the most painful......I remember why I love her........expressive and poignant write. |
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Re: She's a cold habit
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by Sagefairy on
Tuesday, 30th April 2013 @ 08:39:52 PM AEST
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| Nice work! It certainly conveys the scene and the mood. Blessings, SF |
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Re: She's a cold habit
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by PhantomVampyress on
Saturday, 4th May 2013 @ 01:45:01 PM AEST
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deep and intensely dark.. its awesome!! great job
Jennittude |
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Re: She's a cold habit
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by hauntedscorp on
Saturday, 11th October 2014 @ 10:46:53 AM AEST
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Oooh. Juicy lines and thought process. Love the honesty in this piece, and the way you laid it out is perfect.
~Scorp |
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