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Missing Link
Contributed by
Soulhacker
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Monday, 29th April 2013 @ 04:33:35 AM in AEST
Topic:
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What I desire? What motivates me? What I think?
If you seeking for answer, I suggest look for the missing link!!
Have it occurred to you when you read it you and I move in lip sync?
I want you to understand what I wrote as it’s not just any BLACK INK!!
My thoughts are like sea dive in and search for the key!!
Believe me you won’t suffocate instead you might find the true me!
Don’t be astonished or afraid if it turns out something else that you thought it would be!
What you see is just you and me and for me it’s always us three!!
My motivation the foundation of every creation is not mere a narration
Its elation my salvation, perfection and complicated situation!!
It’s up to you to feel the vibration without my translation!
Your appreciation followed by my agitation resulting in aspiration!!
If you understand its declaration if not it’s my reincarnation
Copyright ©
Soulhacker
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2013-04-29 04:33:35]
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Re: Missing Link
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by karu on
Monday, 29th April 2013 @ 10:43:24 AM AEST
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wow 1,superb
very emptional |
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Re: Missing Link
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by xHeathenx on
Tuesday, 30th April 2013 @ 05:47:48 AM AEST
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| Loving the exclamation and rhythm. A couple grammatical issues like conjugation, but nothing big. I like the use of so many words in similar pronunciation at the end, but that last line loses me. |
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