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I don't want protection
Contributed by
cherryamber
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Saturday, 27th April 2013 @ 05:35:30 PM in AEST
Topic:
DreamsandWishes
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I’m not so sure it’s such a good idea to talk to me
Then say there is trouble, or there is too much going on
Or you’r’e scared of commitment because it may break you
Like you win something by guarding yourself
As if protecting yourself is the safest option
Well it is of course, because it hurts when it matters
it feels like sickness through your bones when all your membranes
shatter
and it only hurts equally as much as it gave you feeling and worth and will
and nourishment and the wound is now only as deep as it was once was wide; it only kills you as much as it once fulfilled you inside
And this game we win by guarding ourselves;
the prize of protecting your heart
Well I don’t want to win that game
By following the safest option
I want to feel everything with all that its got
The total depth; the inexplainable; I want nothing less
I want to be so shattered that at the end of my life
There is nothing left
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2013-04-27 17:35:30] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: I don't want protection
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Saturday, 27th April 2013 @ 11:00:04 PM AEST (User
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Your title speaks, of sweetness, endurance,
self confidence, this failure to want or ask for security,
a boldness, an indifference, to being afraid to love.
You will, you shall, you are.
This is seldomly free, almost never, and when it can
be, it is to be treasured.
This is quite good. Very bold indeed! Greatness, in any battle. And love is a battlefield for some --- especially expressive writers who don't mince words.
Great job.
Thanks!
Peace!
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