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After Dark
Contributed by
cathartic
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Thursday, 25th April 2013 @ 11:59:45 PM in AEST
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I think about the way you would hold me. I think about how the heat of our bodies would make the covers jealous. And how your nightly stirs would never interrupt our embrace. Moonlit rooms create godless sanctuaries. You were my religion.
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Re: After Dark
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by deusdeira on
Friday, 26th April 2013 @ 03:08:02 AM AEST
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| Godless sanctuaries... an interesting concept. A place where you find solace without faith. I have always seen morality as such a sanctuary. |
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Re: After Dark
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by MickyTwo1984 on
Friday, 26th April 2013 @ 05:46:53 AM AEST
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| Short and powerful. I enjoyed this very much. |
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Re: After Dark
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by unknown_utopia on
Saturday, 27th April 2013 @ 09:56:21 PM AEST
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Powerful
wow
I really like this flow.....
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Re: After Dark
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by JimKoz on
Monday, 9th December 2013 @ 12:47:03 AM AEST
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| Nostalgia at it's finest. Simple, yet powerful and haunting. |
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Re: After Dark
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by JimKoz on
Tuesday, 10th December 2013 @ 10:38:22 PM AEST
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| I have to make a comment once again on this great poem. Ha, This reminds me of a feel from an artist. "Daughter." Check them out they're brilliant. |
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Re: After Dark
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by Voyager on
Saturday, 21st December 2013 @ 12:07:58 AM AEST
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| Interesting write especially the choice of words in description. |
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