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Ties that bind
Contributed by
MickyTwo1984
on
Thursday, 25th April 2013 @ 10:59:03 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Scented flesh & ties that bind but in more ways than one.
Emotions marked upon on the smoothest skin.
Blinded lust im lost and loving it.
Broken love & souls as one,we seek our redemption in sin.
Copyright ©
MickyTwo1984
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2013-04-25 10:59:03] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Ties that bind
(User Rating: 1 ) by VRR on
Saturday, 27th April 2013 @ 02:17:16 AM AEST (User
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The idea is great but the way of expressing could have been better. The language and punctuation should be used better as it adds essence to poetry.
Do write and show us better. Kudos Vrr |
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