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A delicate balance.
Contributed by
MickyTwo1984
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Thursday, 25th April 2013 @ 10:42:48 AM in AEST
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Relief, freedom, renewal and cautious excitement
A long road walked for reasons unknown at the time
My conscience is clear neither slave nor master
My journey is once again mine and ill make it
But Ill do so with bare feet, ill feel the earth beneath me
Ill embrace the wind and the rain taking pleasure from the cold
And when the warmth of the sun is no more comfort than a burden
Ill remember the winter and wish for it to rain
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2013-04-25 10:42:48]
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Re: A delicate balance.
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by Sagefairy on
Thursday, 25th April 2013 @ 03:41:50 PM AEST
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| I'm enjoying this since it speaks of travel and hiking and I will soon be doing that as well. It has a quiet feel to it - a sense of balance. Very nicely done! Blessings, SF |
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Re: A delicate balance.
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by unknown_utopia on
Saturday, 27th April 2013 @ 10:03:49 PM AEST
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"neither slave nor master "
Love that line...
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