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I am Missing Out in the World
Contributed by
rosebush
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Wednesday, 24th April 2013 @ 08:42:34 PM in AEST
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oops
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What am I missing in the world?
Is it too much to ask
Now I know my mission,now I know my task
I must explore the world,and in every inch I see
I will learn everything,so it will always stay with me
After I finish exploring the world
here is what I will do
I will write my own book about it
With people just like YOU!
Copyright ©
rosebush
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2013-04-24 20:42:34] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: I am Missing Out in the World
(User Rating: 1 ) by VRR on
Saturday, 27th April 2013 @ 02:30:22 AM AEST (User
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It seemed sort of abrupt. But maybe a sequel to it shall reveal the share that is missing. Hence, it has grasped my attention.
Do give a next part to it.
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Re: I am Missing Out in the World
(User Rating: 1 ) by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Friday, 17th May 2013 @ 07:13:51 PM AEST (User
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We all feel we are missing out on something. Sometimes we view the lives of others with a jealous eye...yet.....maybe they are doing the same to us too!!
Food for thought
Steve |
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Re: I am Missing Out in the World
(User Rating: 1 ) by scentless_flower on
Tuesday, 5th November 2013 @ 06:10:01 PM AEST (User
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It would be nice indeed to see a second part to this.
great stuff though..definitely catches you. |
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