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SPIDER
Contributed by
colinb
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Wednesday, 24th April 2013 @ 04:29:49 AM in AEST
Topic:
NaturePoetry
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My friend the spider,
He is a hitch hiker,
Landed on my ute,
When I took the Millmerran route,
It's no lie,
A web full of flie's,
Each day we go for a drive,
His web blows away into the sky,
Holding on so tight,
He hangs on with all his might,
I see the relief in his eye's,
When we finish our drive,
Must enjoy the ride,
Because he rebuilds his life,
A new web to catch flie's,
Will he build it stronger tonight,
So it doesn't blow away into the sky,
On our next drive.
Colin Bradley.
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colinb
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2013-04-24 04:29:49] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: SPIDER
(User Rating: 1 ) by deusdeira on
Friday, 26th April 2013 @ 03:16:53 AM AEST (User
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This poem made me laugh. I couldn't help but picture the spider clinging to your car while you drive :) There was a tiny little spider in my room once. It would just run around the ceiling all day, never coming down, never making a web, just zig-zagging as fast as he could from one end to the other. I even named him "lost" :) anyways, thanks for the laugh. |
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Re: SPIDER
(User Rating: 1 ) by ladyfawn on
Monday, 14th July 2014 @ 04:39:12 PM AEST (User
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lmao! ha! this is adorable!
hugs n' love nessa |
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