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Solus...
Contributed by
ScribereHabeo
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Tuesday, 23rd April 2013 @ 05:11:31 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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Light escapes my mind as the clouds seem to form
I am cold by myself, i no longer feel warm
I have forgoten what it feels like to sleep
The tears in my eyes can help but creep
My lonliness allows me to weep....
I gave up hope long ago
Why you ask.... I do not know
Sadness fills my veins
Depression pulls back the reigns
I cry silently..... when it rains
I submit to the Grey
I see no other way
The sadness dragging my slow pace
The sadness of seeing her face
I still cry, being lonely
But not too loud.......just incase...
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Re: Solus...
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 23rd April 2013 @ 05:21:03 PM AEST
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I can relate. Well done...I really like that last line!
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Tim |
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Re: Solus...
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by Breezy on
Tuesday, 23rd April 2013 @ 09:27:39 PM AEST
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Both sad and moving. I'm with Tim. That last line is especially relatable.
Good write.
~ Breezy |
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