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Used and Abused , Back for More
Contributed by
Jyssvw22
on
Tuesday, 23rd April 2013 @ 08:23:35 AM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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It's been a struggle
To move forward with life
It's been memorable
Your incision with the knife
You cut my heart out
As you told me goodbye
Oh how I've wasted
An opportunity to fly
You are logical
A well developed response to all I say
Standing strong, I can't argue with the truth
Your conviction won't stray
Flipped my life upside down
Now I can't find my way
Lost in endless depression
I have no strength to get up,
no strength to walk away
Heavy breathing
My trembling finger dials your number
You turn as you are leaving
I beg you for another
A chance at love
Our lives should be lived together
When I asked you if you loved me
You told me yes, "forever"
Separated by your words
We now sleep apart
Because of your thoughts
I am alone, drunk, in the dark
Your actions have proved fateful
You wanted a new start
I thought of us as inseparable
A fool chasing the beat of his own heart
Unacceptable
I have yet to come to grips
With my reality
And how this piece of the puzzle fits
They say it will make me stronger
I have lost the will to live
They say I will love again
How can I?
I have no more love to give
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Jyssvw22
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2013-04-23 08:23:35]
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Re: Used and Abused , Back for More
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by Sagefairy on
Tuesday, 23rd April 2013 @ 08:27:54 AM AEST
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| Well... this emotionally poignant poem touched me. Blessings, SF |
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Re: Used and Abused , Back for More
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by Breezy on
Tuesday, 23rd April 2013 @ 10:11:54 PM AEST
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jyss, it has been a while since I read you and it is awesome to see you are
still making the page bleed . Your words continue to stain as your
emotion drips from every line. That last verse is frighteningly familiar ~
Outstanding !!
~ Breezy
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Re: Used and Abused , Back for More
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by hauntedscorp on
Monday, 3rd November 2014 @ 01:32:58 PM AEST
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This rocks!!!! Not the crummy RL stuff that inspired this, but the realness. A barrage of honesty exposing raw skin. Wow!
Well done with those opening two stanzas, and that ending that suffocates. Amazed!
~Scorp |
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