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Gone.
Contributed by
Jigget
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Tuesday, 23rd April 2013 @ 12:45:55 AM in AEST
Topic:
drugabuse
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Gone.
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it's positively everything that, for you, just never was.
it's definitely nothing that everybody does.
you won't be There unless you should be anywhere but There.
you won't pretend to live again since No One Really Cares.
your grin is simply stitched in skin that emptiness has stretched.
that awful taste left in your mouth was there before you retched.
it's chance dancing with happenstance. it's had you all the while.
you're a grinning fright with a hungry bite that's eaten up your smile.
it's rumor of a Lie you told to Right that Wretched Wrong.
it's all that mattered; tattered, battered, shattered, broken, Gone.
Joshua Howell
3-four-12
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Jigget
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2013-04-23 00:45:55]
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Re: Gone.
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 23rd April 2013 @ 01:33:07 AM AEST
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I really like the way you have written this! This is great!
Thank you,
Tim |
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Re: Gone.
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by poet17 on
Tuesday, 23rd April 2013 @ 07:52:14 AM AEST
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That is very interesting. We both wrote poems with the same title, but a different context. Drugs definitely lie to people and in the end you end up gone...
Blessing,
Poet17 |
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Re: Gone.
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by jyssvw22 on
Tuesday, 23rd April 2013 @ 08:25:10 AM AEST
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| Very cool. Like the fast style. Feel the hate and love all at once. |
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Re: Gone.
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 23rd April 2013 @ 01:50:40 PM AEST
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| Are you using shiny in the same context (definition) they use on Firefly? |
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Re: Gone.
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by Breezy on
Tuesday, 23rd April 2013 @ 11:40:03 PM AEST
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Oh, this is grand indeed! I adore the flow of it. You have opened up
a fascination that will linger long after I've navigated away from this
page. There is much here that evokes strong emotion.
Spectacularly written . :)
~ Breezy
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Re: Gone.
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by deusdeira on
Friday, 26th April 2013 @ 03:29:14 AM AEST
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| I find this poem extremely sad. Well written... emotional... angry... but most of all... sad. Betrayal and sadness is what this poem represents to me, and it makes me wish that the world was not such a place. |
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