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Beer
Contributed by
Bittan
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Monday, 22nd April 2013 @ 04:11:31 PM in AEST
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He puts his lips on me and held my slender neck,
He put his tongue in me, and sucked out all the wet
He said that he loved me, he said he liked my form,
I stood there cold and naked yet he preferred me that way to warm,
He said that he loved me and that it is after me that he would lust,
however I know when I'm empty he would throw me away to bust.
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Bittan
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2013-04-22 16:11:31]
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Re: Beer
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by desciple on
Monday, 22nd April 2013 @ 07:23:22 PM AEST
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| Nice write |
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Re: Beer
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by emystar on
Monday, 22nd April 2013 @ 08:21:21 PM AEST
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Welcome to YPDC.
You tripped me out for a minete, then I remembered the name at the top. Then I saw the whole picture.
Good work 'cause you broke the monotony.
Blessings,
emy |
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Re: Beer
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by sebgreen on
Tuesday, 23rd April 2013 @ 06:00:21 PM AEST
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| Though this is beautiful it saddens me,though I am not sure if it should .... |
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Re: Beer
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by Stalkee on
Sunday, 28th April 2013 @ 02:34:45 AM AEST
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| This is very creative and I really enjoyed it. It sparked a deep sense of sadness in me and will always leave me questioning if I should take this poem at face value or if I should consider it a very creative metaphor. |
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