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as I flee
Contributed by
ming
on
Sunday, 14th April 2013 @ 10:25:24 PM in AEST
Topic:
abstract
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able to see
in the dark
a statement
now a bruise
soft & grey
with tales
still heavy
with hope
in hand
destroying
to create.
ming
Copyright ©
ming
... [
2013-04-14 22:25:24] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: as I flee
(User Rating: 1 ) by karu on
Tuesday, 16th April 2013 @ 11:56:44 AM AEST (User
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short,simple and sweet |
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Re: as I flee
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 17th April 2013 @ 11:53:53 AM AEST (User
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Sounds like someone being abused. Very interesting work.
Thank you for posting,
Tim |
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Re: as I flee
(User Rating: 1 ) by elle on
Thursday, 13th June 2013 @ 10:27:36 PM AEST (User
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I burn down the house of my mind
to rebuild the ruins of my soul. . .
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Re: as I flee
(User Rating: 1 ) by FireStarter on
Tuesday, 8th September 2015 @ 05:32:47 PM AEST (User
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The imagery is perfect |
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