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I USED TO DREAM
Contributed by
GINA
on
Wednesday, 14th May 2003 @ 10:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
DreamsandWishes
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I used to dream of a place by the lake
where the music and moonlight keep me awake
where my way is drawn by a shooting star
making wishes doesn't sound so far
I used to dream of an island ,an exotic land
where i can hide my fear under the sand
where the sound of the waves is inviting me
to sing,dance..just feel free
Then i met you and stopped to have this dream
as it became true with your love supreme
I believed i found in you this place
in your gentle touch and warm embrace
I believed when i saw in your eyes that light
you're my land, my star, my breath,my sight
Until you showed me it wasn't true
So i lost my dream,and i lost you
Copyright ©
GINA
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2003-05-14 22:05:00]
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Re: I USED TO DREAM
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by Ilhar on
Wednesday, 14th May 2003 @ 10:43:19 PM AEST
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sad but very well written and beautiful
Shari |
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Re: I USED TO DREAM
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by LOWMAN613 on
Thursday, 15th May 2003 @ 12:15:03 AM AEST
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AAHH I did enjoy this sad write!
You can still dream! Christina |
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Re: I USED TO DREAM
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 15th May 2003 @ 06:50:47 AM AEST
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I really enjoyed reading this. If you can find it once - you can find it again.
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Re: I USED TO DREAM
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by Jennifer_Deanne_Driscoll on
Monday, 19th May 2003 @ 03:59:59 AM AEST
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| So saaad. Great write. |
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Re: I USED TO DREAM
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 3rd June 2003 @ 12:40:10 PM AEST
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See what happens when go meeting people behind my back :P
Kidding, a7san ma yfakkir 7adan shi:P
Nice poem, very well written ;) |
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Re: I USED TO DREAM
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by Wachumiri on
Wednesday, 8th October 2003 @ 12:50:21 PM AEST
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Never stop dreaming. Whatever happens, never stop dreaming. When you give up on them, they give up on you.
Wishing for better days,
David |
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