|
 Menu
|
|
|
|
|
Social
|
|
|
|
|
A knife Through The Heart
Contributed by
Barron94
on
Thursday, 11th April 2013 @ 06:40:39 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
|
A knife through the heart,
Love bleeding out.
I would throw away the world,
Just to spend a moment with you.
You are my everything,
I can't live without you.
You're smile lights me up for days,
Like no other.
I wish I could call you mine,
It's total heartache.
I've been told to give up,
But I still find hope in the words you say.
So I'm going to fight,
Prove myself to you.
I need you by my side,
Take my hand and call me yours.
You are my true love,
No one is an equal.
Copyright ©
Barron94
... [
2013-04-11 18:40:39]
(Date/Time posted on
site)
Advertisments:
|
|
|
|
|
|
Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more
|
|
All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry
Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any
comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please
contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title
etc.
|
|
|
Re: A knife Through The Heart
(User Rating: 1 )
by Sagefairy on
Friday, 12th April 2013 @ 11:35:46 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
Lots of emotion in this one. Unfortunately even if love is true and fought for, there isn't always a happy ending. But ... I do wish you luck with it.
Blessings, SF |
|
|
Re: A knife Through The Heart
(User Rating: 1 )
by jordanarce17 on
Thursday, 18th April 2013 @ 07:48:46 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| I understand how you feel. I love this one girl and she choose this guy over me, and I keep fighting, and it's still not a enough, and I hope you are okay, and you just keep fighting for them. Bless be |
|
|
Re: A knife Through The Heart
(User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on
Wednesday, 1st May 2013 @ 06:06:24 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
Very sad but written well.
Blessings,
emy |
|
|
|
· 
Poetry
Community
Members
Areas
Reference
Search
Top
Others
