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Fading away
Contributed by
iodinelove
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Thursday, 11th April 2013 @ 03:18:46 PM in AEST
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abstract
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There is no peace on the streets anymore
With cell phones and street lights
The last bit of star
Fading away
There is no sober bar
To rest ones bones for a night
To laugh and to sing and to pour
Copyright ©
iodinelove
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2013-04-11 15:18:46] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Fading away
(User Rating: 1 ) by TheHumblePoet on
Thursday, 11th April 2013 @ 06:04:13 PM AEST (User
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Short, sweet and true |
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Re: Fading away
(User Rating: 1 ) by ming on
Friday, 12th April 2013 @ 08:50:12 PM AEST (User
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I took a walk in my mind leaving a bar in gloom with the reading of this. Nice work. ming |
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Re: Fading away
(User Rating: 1 ) by emystar on
Friday, 14th June 2013 @ 12:30:41 PM AEST (User
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Your words have me mesmerized. Some how I just drifted away.
smiles,
emy |
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