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Receive Me.
Contributed by
chard
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Wednesday, 14th May 2003 @ 08:35:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Receive Me. Mentally, physically, spiritually.
Receive this information. Pertaining, to
what type of man I plan to be.
Receive Me emotionally.
So that I can openly,devote to thee,
2 divine minds, combined, within their prime.
With every line that I write,
I have you in mind.
I lose track of time.
Thinking of the wine, we sip as our spirits
kiss.
Damn, I hope your receiving this...
Internally open your heart to me.
I want to walk with thee.
Lady in my life.
As we walk through the valley. I'll protect
you like a Black Knight.
Sword drawn ready to fight.
And I'll die within your arms,
at an age where I cant go on.
Depressed -n- restin at the corner of heaven.
Stressing. Not wanting you to die.
But im impatient. Waiting, anticipating.
The soul for which I've been waiting.
When we finally reunite,
the angels will recite,
this poem that I write,
RECEIVE ME TONIGHT...................
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chard
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2003-05-14 20:35:00]
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Re: Receive Me.
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by Ilhar on
Wednesday, 14th May 2003 @ 09:45:58 PM AEST
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very well written, lovely poem
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Re: Receive Me.
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by Metalmouth666 on
Wednesday, 14th May 2003 @ 11:38:43 PM AEST
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| This is a very good poem, and written well great job |
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Re: Receive Me.
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by Chard on
Thursday, 15th May 2003 @ 05:41:29 AM AEST
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| Thank you. Very much. |
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Re: Receive Me.
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by Chard on
Thursday, 15th May 2003 @ 05:41:45 AM AEST
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| Thank you. Very much. |
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Re: Receive Me.
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 15th May 2003 @ 07:46:05 AM AEST
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What a fantastic poem. I love the dark undertones. Outstanding work.
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Re: Receive Me.
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by Chard on
Thursday, 15th May 2003 @ 09:08:31 AM AEST
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| thank you |
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Re: Receive Me.
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by Chard on
Thursday, 15th May 2003 @ 09:08:37 AM AEST
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