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Scorched
Contributed by
raspberry89
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Saturday, 6th April 2013 @ 05:55:43 PM in AEST
Topic:
toughstuff
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My arms reach for heaven
but my feet are firmly rooted in hell
I'd like to escape the fire
but i'm not doing well
My efforts mean nothing
only suffering will suffice
I'm stuck here
in the depths of the night
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raspberry89
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2013-04-06 17:55:43]
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Re: Scorched
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 6th April 2013 @ 09:33:58 PM AEST
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Don't know your story but I hope you're going to be right.
Day light, just a smidgen sometimes, is what I hope you find.
Good luck!
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Re: Scorched
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by mvvenkataraman on
Sunday, 7th April 2013 @ 11:27:53 AM AEST
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Your poem exactly describes my position
Or in a way the position of almost all
That is life and we must have to adjust
I appreciate your small, but sound poem.
mvvenkataraman |
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