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i despise this day
Contributed by
rosebush
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Saturday, 6th April 2013 @ 11:02:34 AM in AEST
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hbadday
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This is a day that I despise
nothing is good during this day
I had a fight with a friend
it felt like it would never end
and that's not all
there is too much to say
but what I can say now is that I despise this day
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Re: i despise this day
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by Sagefairy on
Saturday, 6th April 2013 @ 12:12:57 PM AEST
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Oh how much I can relate to this!
Sometimes it's not parsing through what one says. Other times it's someone else not parsing through what they think they are receiving.
Most of the time it's not really to give offense, but rather to protect or defend oneself.
It's the cold war, the detent, the walls...
And we all have them, one way or another.
But you put it consisely! Nice work!
Blessings, SF |
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Re: i despise this day
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 7th April 2013 @ 01:25:33 AM AEST
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very concrete, bad day. I like that!
It's memorable though, at least it is that.
It's not subjective or even quantitative.
It's just bad. You won't look back on it and someday and laugh. You'll always rue this day. End of story.
A string of bad days often gets mired in loose terminology.
Peace!
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Re: i despise this day
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by mvvenkataraman on
Sunday, 7th April 2013 @ 11:24:39 AM AEST
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Dear, I object to your poem
As this day is a fine day
As you have created a poem
By using this day as a villain
Let us pray for the best
And do our honest duty
Asking God to take care
Let us proceed with hope.
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Re: i despise this day
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 24th April 2013 @ 09:12:30 PM AEST
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Really good vent.
good work.
blessings, huggs,
emy |
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