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Shine Your Love To Me and See The Reflection
Contributed by
tbsbikescene
on
Wednesday, 14th May 2003 @ 05:35:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Must have done something
For you to even consider me
But your heart has been broken before
Yet so has mine...
Lets promise eachother we'll take it slow
One baby step at a time...
Give me your hand angel and you take mine
This can't be superficial this time
I can't take another one of these
Romance is just another way of ruining friendship
Maybe it will be different this time
But conceil my heart in your palm
And steal my lips with a heartfelt kiss
I'm ready this time...
My mind is in full effect on you
Copyright ©
tbsbikescene
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2003-05-14 17:35:00]
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Re: Shine Your Love To Me and See The Reflection
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by LOWMAN613 on
Thursday, 15th May 2003 @ 12:11:31 AM AEST
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| AAHH This was so sweet,everyone has a past & thats what it should stay a past! Good write! Christina |
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Re: Shine Your Love To Me and See The Reflection
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 15th May 2003 @ 08:16:26 AM AEST
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This sent a shiver up my spine. It is beautiful and loving and yet cautious. Great piece of work.
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Re: Shine Your Love To Me and See The Reflection
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by Tbsbikescene on
Thursday, 15th May 2003 @ 10:42:53 PM AEST
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wow that means soo much to me that u enjoyed it...thank you
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Re: Shine Your Love To Me and See The Reflection
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by Tbsbikescene on
Thursday, 15th May 2003 @ 10:43:38 PM AEST
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Wow u don't know how much that means to me...thank you soo much
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Re: Shine Your Love To Me and See The Reflection
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by Apartment213 on
Friday, 16th May 2003 @ 11:25:43 PM AEST
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this was a great poem, intelligent i really dig this one
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