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The first spring
Contributed by
iodinelove
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Tuesday, 2nd April 2013 @ 12:01:31 AM in AEST
Topic:
Haiku
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At the dawns new light
Dancing among the lilies
She is the first spring;
A summer song to rouse me
A winter to make me sleep
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iodinelove
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2013-04-02 00:01:31]
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Re: The first spring
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by needledancing on
Tuesday, 2nd April 2013 @ 07:00:35 AM AEST
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| Reflecting my hearts desire to have spring hurry in and awaken me. Enjoyed ND |
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Re: The first spring
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by karu on
Tuesday, 2nd April 2013 @ 09:26:19 AM AEST
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nice to see it
i am trying to learn about Haiku poem |
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Re: The first spring
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by Ambivalence on
Tuesday, 2nd April 2013 @ 11:47:32 PM AEST
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simply beautiful! glad to read your poetry again, it's refreshing...
-Ambivalence |
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Re: The first spring
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 3rd April 2013 @ 04:29:48 AM AEST
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Awesome,.
job Abe.
It's always good to see some thing from you.
Smiles, blessings,
emy |
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Re: The first spring
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by ming on
Friday, 12th April 2013 @ 08:57:53 PM AEST
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| This sweet thing pulled me in. Thanks for sharing. Lovely. ming |
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