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the ocean
Contributed by
rosebush
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Monday, 1st April 2013 @ 10:06:49 PM in AEST
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Deep in the great blue sea
The water is more like knowledge
The coral looks like a rainbow
In the deep ocean
The ocean is big with living creatures
Swimming in
The deep dark cold
Ocean!
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rosebush
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2013-04-01 22:06:49]
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Re: the ocean
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by emystar on
Monday, 1st April 2013 @ 10:41:37 PM AEST
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Beautiful writing.
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emy |
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Re: the ocean
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by iodinelove on
Tuesday, 2nd April 2013 @ 12:06:20 AM AEST
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I grew up on an Island, so I have a deep connection to the ocean. Both a great fear and a great longing to meet its depths. Sadly, I am in the mountains now, knowing too both the trepidation and beauty of these great towering mounds of stone and clay.
Anyway, before I get carried away...good job, and keep writing. |
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Re: the ocean
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by needledancing on
Tuesday, 2nd April 2013 @ 07:02:23 AM AEST
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| nature and environment a wonderful way to put our words to great use.Continue to be inspired by all that surrounds you. Good write.ND |
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