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ALL OR NONE
Contributed by
emystar
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Monday, 1st April 2013 @ 02:27:21 AM in AEST
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We've had our roaming years
To shop around and see.
Many have tried and failed
Both for you and me.
All or none is my reply
For your love tenderly.
All or none is my say.
Save your love for only me.
I'll give you all of me to
Warm your heart and soul.
Saving my tenderness for you
As life and destiny does flow.
Together as one we'll try
To fulfill our dreams, sweet.
We'll be devoted to energy's fate
Our love waiting, so unique.
Copyright ©
emystar
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2013-04-01 02:27:21]
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Re: ALL OR NONE
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by karu on
Monday, 1st April 2013 @ 12:13:54 PM AEST
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| sweetly written |
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Re: ALL OR NONE
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by dvtpdw on
Monday, 1st April 2013 @ 06:31:43 PM AEST
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| An ode to the lure of forever love - a fruit that whent tasted brings a joyous life. Great write, and I agree, very sweet - brought a smile to my face. Thank you for sharing, P |
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Re: ALL OR NONE
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by Jigget on
Tuesday, 2nd April 2013 @ 01:13:02 AM AEST
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| as a single guy, romantic to the core and beyond, i found this poem made me sad...it must be nice to feel the emotions that dress as these words. i like the containment and restraint. |
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Re: ALL OR NONE
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by needledancing on
Tuesday, 2nd April 2013 @ 06:57:22 AM AEST
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| Wonderful from the heart words of love. How we all have the perfect picture in our hearts of how it should be.You have written it well.Enjoyed.ND |
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Re: ALL OR NONE
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by PreciousKitten on
Tuesday, 2nd April 2013 @ 02:30:40 PM AEST
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| Love it! No questions about it. Keep writing |
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Re: ALL OR NONE
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by northernlights on
Wednesday, 3rd April 2013 @ 02:04:09 PM AEST
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| Beautiful tender write x |
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Re: ALL OR NONE
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by jerseysue on
Saturday, 6th April 2013 @ 03:56:12 PM AEST
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Lovely to see you still on here.
Beautiful poem. |
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Re: ALL OR NONE
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by deusdeira on
Sunday, 7th April 2013 @ 07:23:27 AM AEST
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"as life and destiny does flow"
This is a beautiful poem. It is often things from our past that we love the most. You should relish this memory. Art often shows us that even in the past, when we knew so little compared to our current selves, we were still capable of beautiful things. |
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Re: ALL OR NONE
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by Sagefairy on
Thursday, 11th April 2013 @ 10:04:27 AM AEST
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This is a beautiful write and indeed romantic. I know those sentiments are in me - but for the meantime I must take the middle road and love from afar... I want too much it seems.
Blessings, SF |
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Re: ALL OR NONE
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by CharM on
Saturday, 20th April 2013 @ 01:29:07 PM AEST
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| Wooowww what a beautiful poem... honest and straight to the point. Double like! :) |
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Re: ALL OR NONE
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by Archie on
Wednesday, 24th April 2013 @ 01:23:30 PM AEST
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| Its a good poem, to me it feels like its to site members who have not been around that much or friends who have not hung out much ( that includes me ) I like the sentiment. |
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Re: ALL OR NONE
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by unknown_utopia on
Saturday, 27th April 2013 @ 10:00:34 PM AEST
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You Cheating on me?
Love the way this flow made me feel
hmm...... |
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Re: ALL OR NONE
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by Helenesovig on
Thursday, 2nd May 2013 @ 04:35:56 AM AEST
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| Very beautiful, the composition was very nice and simple and the words were very well chosen. The love clearly shines through. |
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Re: ALL OR NONE
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by Sommer on
Sunday, 26th May 2013 @ 11:43:38 PM AEST
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| This is beautiful and a very sweet concept. I can very much relate to the all or none sort of mentality even though it hasn't worked out for me just yet. Great write |
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Re: ALL OR NONE
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by Sasha on
Tuesday, 28th May 2013 @ 11:12:53 PM AEST
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| What a lovely poem! |
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Re: ALL OR NONE
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by myheartsvoice on
Thursday, 13th June 2013 @ 03:36:15 PM AEST
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Beautiful as always Emy a joy to read . . .
Ben :) |
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Re: ALL OR NONE
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by mick on
Saturday, 15th June 2013 @ 03:47:16 PM AEST
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| sweetly written |
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Re: ALL OR NONE
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by alicewhite on
Saturday, 21st December 2013 @ 02:25:53 PM AEST
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| BEAUTIFUL, and all and none resonates esoteric meaning to me, again great write,xxx and thankyou for reading my poem and for your comforting comment, very much appreciated ,xxx |
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