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your touch keeps me on
Contributed by
Apartment213
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Wednesday, 14th May 2003 @ 04:35:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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fairy tale
broken every bone
fairy tale
been waiting to get u alone
ur the ink all around my skin
i know five senses will keep me on
sweet soft and batty eyes
roll in ur magnificence, keeps me on
ur soft skin keeps me on earth
tonight is the night
been waiting to get u alone
fairy tale
broken every bone
fairy tale
been waiting to get u alone
the warmth inside u, keeps me on
the finger tips of an angel
draw heaven a little nearer
trembling voice in my soul, she keeps me on
her body made of stars and bright eyes
we'll never feel fear again
bodies mend
this higher level
i die for her skin
and the ink drops
in the shape of angel wings
the taste of sweet
in my head forever
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Re: your touch keeps me on
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 14th May 2003 @ 04:58:24 PM AEST
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hmm looks like somebody's in love.
best to ya.
Nawtee |
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Re: your touch keeps me on
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by tease_whizz on
Wednesday, 14th May 2003 @ 05:08:35 PM AEST
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| this is beautiful...i love the imagery and the visual images you create. i wish you and lindsey all the best, i think you'll be really good for each other. keep writing, Kate x |
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by AngryPrincess on
Wednesday, 14th May 2003 @ 07:17:30 PM AEST
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kenny, this is beautiful...i cant wait...:O) you are absolutely amazing....i love you.. "all i want is you..." Paint mongoose
Lindsey |
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Re: your touch keeps me on
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by DreamWeaver on
Thursday, 15th May 2003 @ 01:24:41 AM AEST
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| Beautifully written .. you have a great style. Best wishes to you both... Jan |
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Re: your touch keeps me on
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 16th May 2003 @ 03:05:12 PM AEST
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Very beautiful poem... i wish you the best... love can be a very splendid thing...
~Crystal~ |
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Re: your touch keeps me on
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by ladyfawn on
Saturday, 17th May 2003 @ 12:53:35 AM AEST
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i don't see how broken bones fits within' a love poem;
"fairy tale
broken every bone"
but i do love this poem muchly, and it has a strong ending;
"i die for her skin
and the ink drops
in the shape of angel wings
the taste of sweet
in my head forever"
all very sweet, vivid lovely:)
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Re: your touch keeps me on
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by wazarov on
Saturday, 17th May 2003 @ 02:20:06 AM AEST
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| i see kenny that you have the creative combination of life, love and talent, you`ll never get lost in pain. |
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Re: your touch keeps me on
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by Ronald on
Saturday, 17th May 2003 @ 05:06:08 AM AEST
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| Good work and I hope your love will flourish! Keep up the good work pal! See ya around! |
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