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Ashes to Ashes
Contributed by
raspberry89
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Friday, 29th March 2013 @ 10:40:32 PM in AEST
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Why speak
when words become weak
and everything you want is in the darkness
and you are forever alone
Happiness will never meet you
and your prince will never seek you
You will die unknowing
from your heart with blood flowing
Beating and pumping
all of your life into nothing
You'll be a stain on the soil
until dust in the face of turmoil
Copyright ©
raspberry89
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2013-03-29 22:40:32]
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Re: Ashes to Ashes
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by alicewhite on
Friday, 29th March 2013 @ 11:01:35 PM AEST
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| written well, a bit harsh tho and very unforgiving,, compassion wouldn't go astray here,, however very concise. |
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Re: Ashes to Ashes
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by emystar on
Monday, 1st April 2013 @ 01:37:35 AM AEST
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Very thought provoking write.
Blessings,
emy |
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Re: Ashes to Ashes
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by bigj on
Wednesday, 3rd April 2013 @ 03:08:29 AM AEST
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| Absolutely loved reading this |
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Re: Ashes to Ashes
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by northernlights on
Wednesday, 3rd April 2013 @ 02:20:29 PM AEST
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| Graphic descriptive,' a voiceless lament,'well written. |
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Re: Ashes to Ashes
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by ForeverAlone on
Sunday, 7th April 2013 @ 12:59:17 AM AEST
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| Even bleeding hearts run out of blood eventually. Good poem. |
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