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i dont feel fine
Contributed by
alicewhite
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Friday, 29th March 2013 @ 05:57:36 PM in AEST
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I fear yesturdays
and tomorrows
but im stuck here
stuck now
crashed
on repeat,
light headed
hazy
rigid
feet
take away all of my sorrows
you say
but im still living
still dying
in my nightmares
night and day,
and i dont feel fine-
i dont feel fine
Im up and down
head spins round and around
like a yo yo
my feet dont touch the ground
and i dont feel fine
i dont feel fine
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Re: i dont feel fine
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by karu on
Saturday, 30th March 2013 @ 05:35:21 AM AEST
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| superrrrrrrrrrr |
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Re: i dont feel fine
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by cherryamber on
Saturday, 30th March 2013 @ 08:10:46 AM AEST
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thanks for sharing. succint and meaningful. but of course, when you feel that way, that is the only way you can speak. in short bursts. because you have no energy. I felt exhausted like you at the end.
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Re: i dont feel fine
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by JamesStockdale on
Wednesday, 12th August 2015 @ 04:37:18 AM AEST
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Much angst.
Great write.
James |
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