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Your Precious Life
Contributed by
cherryamber
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Thursday, 28th March 2013 @ 04:29:33 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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tell me. what are you going to do with your precious life?
are you going to stand on the edge of balconies
and look down, forever wondering what if, why.
my precious life?
when even your bloodstream flows with this aura of despair
desperate to escape with the next artery you tear
I just want to be somebody. somebody. someone.
you’ve got you’re whole damn life. you know that right?
and love is going to fill your soul, and God is going to give you light
those demons in your head. say it with me. ‘they are not who i am’
tell me now. what will you do with your precious life?
Darling. You are already enough, it is you that is precious.
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cherryamber
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2013-03-28 16:29:33]
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Re: Your Precious Life
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by Deidra_Carmichael on
Thursday, 28th March 2013 @ 06:42:55 PM AEST
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Awesomeness right here! More people need to know that they are not worthless; they are masterpieces made by God. Take care and God bless,
Deidra |
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Re: Your Precious Life
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by cathartic on
Thursday, 28th March 2013 @ 09:26:40 PM AEST
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| pleasantly surprised by the ending. it made me smile. thank you. |
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Re: Your Precious Life
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by spud on
Friday, 29th March 2013 @ 04:18:19 PM AEST
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Hi,
This is a powerful demonstration of how such
a personal dilemma should be addressed
poetically. Well said!
T
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Re: Your Precious Life
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by JamesStockdale on
Wednesday, 12th August 2015 @ 04:39:42 AM AEST
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Nice poem.
Enjoyed it very much.
James |
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