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Long Lost Beloved Sister

Contributed by Deidra_Carmichael on Wednesday, 27th March 2013 @ 07:25:23 PM in AEST
Topic: selfstruggles

Oh please reveal yourself I desperately plead
The search party is counting on my ability
To retrieve you from this accidental hiding place
For too long I have neglected my duties
And it all started when I left you at my side table

Unworthy I felt in your presence
For you held the key to my unrecognized bondage
Doubting necessary transformation I pressed on
To the platform well studied supposedly ready
Even I sensed your guidance; what an illusion

Wait, a tap on my shoulder catches me
Beckoning to a framed convict overwhelming me
Desire to free you is confirmed
Your hand is leading me to your abode
I find sweet and floral pleasure here
What is this? Thabk you for such a gift
These petals open my heart to suppressed joy

Tears flow from my eyes as I view
Your confidant, best friend, deceased
You give me time for such and then dry the flood
For you remind me that father dearest is ascended

Oh there is so much I admire about you
Your trust, strength and love for Him
I need to strengthen all of these traits
They are present yet that Prisoner took
Hold of my ear for too long

All have seen and all have enjoyed
But with myself I have been annoyed
I've found you, too many days too late
Assure me that full surrender in me will prevail
For my flesh is fighting and I feel like I have failed
My beloved sister you have become
Unlike before when the clues were merely
Words, lines, imitations, Mary's shadow

Copyright © Deidra_Carmichael ... [ 2013-03-27 19:25:23]
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Re: Long Lost Beloved Sister (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Friday, 8th August 2014 @ 04:39:18 PM AEST
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well i do not know the play tho this is a beautiful poem,

hugs n' love nessa

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