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You say....... And then
Contributed by
PreciousKitten
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Tuesday, 26th March 2013 @ 09:30:26 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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You say you need space for a day
And then you asked to come over
You say you want some free time to think
And then u say you don't want to be alone
You say you want to be single for a while
And then you say I want to come home to you
You say you never want to see me again
And then you say I miss you already
You say you want to my friend and not a lover
And then you asked can we cuddle
You say you want all these things
And then you do not later
Make up ur mind
Please my dear
So I can breathe with ease
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PreciousKitten
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2013-03-26 09:30:26]
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Re: You say....... And then
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by karu on
Tuesday, 26th March 2013 @ 11:11:46 AM AEST
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| nice way to ask |
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Re: You say....... And then
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by NightMareShoGun on
Tuesday, 26th March 2013 @ 12:19:13 PM AEST
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| nicely done |
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Re: You say....... And then
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by northernlights on
Thursday, 28th March 2013 @ 01:57:43 PM AEST
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| Sounds like someone has someone hooked on a fishing line and only reels them in when it suits, if I were the fish I would wriggle free.Strong evocative writing. |
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